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King Without Crown

KING WITHOUT CROWN Unafraid, magnificent fur of golden brown A king but neither has a throne nor crown Thunder roar rumbles and echoes up to the core As they can rule round corps and every floor Direct shot to the heart Leo is the fifth in Zodiac chart Ferocious, brave and bold Yet, a Leo has a heart of gold Predicate and pride to pillars day and night Always on guard, fierce and so might Be respectful that Leo prefers! as he knows well his ''Lion share...'' His warmth a blazing ember! Yet, when challenge appears he fires in anger! He is ruled by the immortal sun Hence, with any endeavor his aim a home run! (c) Olive ELoisa 5:32 am July 27, 2014

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2014 9:16:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 1:10:00 AM

Congratulations on first place win in tghe contest, Olive

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/24/2014 1:55:00 PM

This is a very fine write my friend. Congrats on your great win!!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/24/2014 11:39:00 AM

love this poem Olive congrats on fine win hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2014 11:16:00 AM

- Hey Olive, congratulations on your first place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 9:52:00 AM

Olive, congratulations on a TOP of the class win! Excellent write for a well-deserved placement! Pandita

Len Gasun

Date: 8/24/2014 9:48:00 AM

A very beautiful poem on zodiac sign you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Olive Eloisa! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Congratulations on your great win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/10/2014 12:37:00 PM

A CROWN I now give to you for this great right. I won it long ago with guile and might. An unworthy soul like myself. Placed it upon a hidden shelf. Now setting it to light of day. Beg you to accept this I humble gift pray... Great write my friend!!!!

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/10/2014 12:36:00 PM

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 10:36:00 PM

thanks much Robert.. :) you don't need to beg nor give me a crown as your friendship is more than enough.. :D regards to your family.. :D God bless you. :)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 7/25/2014 7:09:00 AM

This is Magnificently done, Bravo Olive, coincidently I'm a Leo, Ha!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 1:44:00 PM

Thank you so much sir..I appreciate it..:)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/23/2014 9:35:00 PM

You know me well, no throne and no crown, this is a magnificent poem Olive! Well done! King Arthur

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/26/2014 7:15:00 AM

Thanks so munch King Arthur.. :D hahaha like your drop by.. :P

Paul Callus

Date: 7/18/2014 5:30:00 AM

Lovely imagery Olive-eloi; you capture all the main ingredients that this lion king requires; good luck in the contest (do you need it!?) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 8/24/2014 4:50:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!!! A very merited top placed win:) Lovely to be standing together on same podium!! Hope you're keeping well:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/20/2014 6:19:00 PM

thank you so much PAul.. :D I appreciate your every drop by..:D you inspire me so well.. :D thanks much.. :D

James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2014 3:22:00 PM

Your fast becoming one of my favourites to read, and it's not hard to see why if many others view your writes. I want to be a Lion now, but'll have to settle for being a goat, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/20/2014 3:20:00 PM

Thanks much James..:) you are very generous to your comments..:)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/17/2014 7:16:00 AM

You roared in with this one Olive! Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/20/2014 3:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan..:) I appreciate you dropping by..:)