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King Oedipus: Foreshadowing

We hang on hints or clues to see what's to come next; I'll cite examples as proofs from a well-known text. He that crawls in fours when rooster gleefully calls, Walks in twos like the blazing sun, but soon he falls; Here's a hint, clue or foreshadowing to foresee His fall from a life's precipice … and it's a key. One comes in, blooming and wearing a laurel wreath, And this bubbling signal, we know, should stop him breathe; He fights a fierce fight at a place, where three roads meet; And so soon, we raise the blanket and hear ... three tweet. A man comes with no eyesight to solve the riddle, And predicts that sinner stands boldly, right middle, And he that mocks him for his ill-fated eyesight, Would leave the city ... groping wearily ... at night. At last, that man with the clearest eyesight we see Leave the stage and us in threes as a beaten bee. 12 syllables in each line A 1st Place in the following contest (judged on Feb. 10, 2021) Feb.9, 2021 (Originally posted on Nov. 25, 2020) The Gem That Slipped Through The Cracks Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh A 2nd Place in the following contest (judged on Jan. 8, 2021) Podium Placing Promise (5) Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/10/2021 7:11:00 PM
Superb write! Congrats on your win, happy the contest brought this poem out of the dusty cupboard!
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Date: 2/11/2021 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker, for your read, congrats and for this wonderfully great comment!!! It's a great pleasure to read the comment!!
Date: 2/10/2021 1:14:00 PM
Newton, I loved this poem but I was asking for a poem with no replies whatsoever. This didn't "slip through the cracks" judging by all the replies. Congrats for placing in my contest nonetheless.
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Date: 2/10/2021 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so much for the great comment and the placement, Edward!!
Date: 1/8/2021 5:58:00 PM
gosh, you seem to know a lot about this famous literature. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 1/8/2021 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for the congrats and the great complement!!
Date: 12/1/2020 2:38:00 PM
Again, this is a phenomenal piece, Newton:-) Reading it a 2nd time, I have to add it to my collection of FAVES!
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Date: 12/1/2020 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Edward, for this impressively great comment and the encouraging complement!!
Date: 11/28/2020 2:37:00 AM
Totally interesting and appealing.
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Date: 11/28/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 11/25/2020 7:26:00 AM
- A thoughtful and powerful poem, Newton - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2020 11:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Llise, for this for this lovelier comment!!

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