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Kinetic Kindness

Do you know that unseen someone is tending the tender leaf? Do you feel the moving spirit behind the ladybird on the tender leaf moving free? Do you think of the force of swiftness in the wake of which birds fly to and fro collecting food? Do you see the care granted by someone that enables them selecting every blade of grass and bit of cloth bit of cotton jute and fiber to create the best of nests? Do you feel such an active Spirit making his home in you and me too, and enabling us to sleep and rise and breath and live? To that Great Spirit of Kindness is my Zenith of Salam. you are not kind, Lord You're the storehouse of kindness We're just your stewards 18 August 2021 Kindness Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 8/23/2021 9:03:00 PM
Hi! I liked the part about the unseen someone. We often don't realize who is being kind behind the scene, whether it's God Himself or someone God is using to help others. I also really like the haiku at the end. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/21/2021 7:03:00 AM
WoW! Amazing! Loved it! I believe God is in all, doing it all.
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Date: 8/19/2021 2:45:00 PM
A very sincere Haibun, that spirit is everywhere indeed. Well done.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/20/2021 10:37:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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