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Kindness Squeeze

KINDNESS SQUEEZE Evolving darkness cocoons Mother Earth . . . Apathy¬ rampant chronic mob disease; Still, I believe etch to flesh a kindness worth. An embryos growth waiting ¬ needing ease. Sun rays choir with wind conceives hope that seize, Beckons me, I smile to cheer the world in need. Sprinkling a wilted plant waving back rebirth. Nameless, unremembered kindness is love seed... One leisure walk inside boulevard girth, I say hello to someone named Louise, Who ask the beautiful spots here in Perth. Louise says: "It's my first time overseas..." Conversing slow under cool autumn breeze. I slowly strew breadcrumbs, I brought, to feed Flocks of hungry teased birds from seven seas. Nameless, unremembered kindness is love seed... Offering calls if she needs anything as I set forth. I jog while extending my hands and knees. Heading then to my home near highway North, I stop, thank God, for the rainbow quilt from trees. for my niece, I bought the best bagel with cheese. Not her birthday but because she's nice indeed! Light ¬dark; good ¬bad her patience a trapeze. Nameless, unremembered kindness is love seed... Locked ~ drooping hearts balm is a kindness squeeze. Tieing strangers shoelace, a kindness head deed. Sharing a meal with a beggar without fees. Nameless, unremembered kindness is love seed... (c)Olive Eloisa 5:20 PM July 13, 2014

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Date: 8/6/2014 10:13:00 PM
OLIVE, :) The best policy is kindness and respect. Congratulations, on your "Random Acts of Kindness" win... Have a sweet day or night... Love LINDA
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Date: 8/1/2014 11:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Olive. I liked it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2014 9:25:00 AM
I don't think these kind of acts are unremembered. They can be pivotal points in a persons life. Congratulations on a fine win Olive. I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 8/1/2014 8:29:00 AM
A very deep and powerful write my friend! Big congrats on your fine win!!!!!
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:33:00 AM
So very lovely Olive ! u really hv an amazing pen my dear,, huge congrats!
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:00:00 AM
This is heartfelt and awesome write, Olive. congrats
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Dr. Ram..:)
Date: 7/31/2014 4:57:00 PM
This is beautiful, Olive. Well done. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/8/2014 6:53:00 PM
Thanks you so much Faye..:) I appreciate your drop by,, am sorry for this late reply.. GBU
Date: 7/31/2014 3:07:00 PM
The second stanza is my fav :) The seed belongs to LOVE [love's seed] Keep up the great work Olive. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Debbie..:) I'm sorry for being late ..:(
Date: 7/15/2014 4:37:00 PM
Lovely write, Olive_eloi. It brings forth your kind nature and the love for others. Another poetic form which you tackle with enthusiasm. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 6:51:00 PM
Thanks Paul..:)
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/1/2014 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Olive_eloi...another lovely win to keep encouraging you in your poetic journey:)) [all I have today is some dark chocolate!] // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2014 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Paul..:) weeeee I fell in like with this type so I chose these from what Debbie enumerated since I never tried it..:) I still like to try another form which I saw from Richard Lamoureux..:) hahahha I like how he did it..:) my problem here is that I hope I get to show in my words some kindness deeds..:)
Date: 7/13/2014 2:23:00 PM
Amazing Olive beautiful use of mono rhyme and kindness is wonderful... Hugs Tim
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:48:00 AM
Yes it is Tim..:) well while I review some literature with this...:) I can't help but to feel light..:) well a kindness act of one two or three sure will lift a smile from someone,.:)
Date: 7/13/2014 9:39:00 AM
Amazing! what a cool poem girl, I enjoyed this very much :)
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Date: 7/14/2014 5:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Casarah..:)

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