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Kind

Kind I saw your face for the first time My whole body trembled like a carriage going fast on a train line Our first kiss was so so so sublime We disappeared into a world that was perfect with only our minds When I heard your voice for the first time It was like angels being released from their chains from the Gods like a song line When I looked into your eyes for the first time I knew I would do anything for you even commit crime When I made love to you for the first time I felt doves bursting out of my heart and into the light of a shining love rhyme When you left me for the last time You shattered my dreams and I felt emptiness and that no one could ever be so unkind; no one could ever be so unkind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/19/2015 6:57:00 AM
Very nice pen Peter! Much enjoyed your romantic piece my dear friend. Have a good day! :) Love and blessings! xxxxx D. ^O^"
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