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Killing Me Softly

Splitting straws reveal tears of unfair truth long and short of it bugs with ugly voices swear Finding you are under the carpet hiding inside echoes disturbing peace The breaking point makes a stand rightly silence shattering glass on the surface breaks code Mirrored reflection flashbacks past repeating sins Playing the same old downer breaking feelings Rewinding backwards sorry does not get it anymore That shows a moon's face upside down frowning Thanking the lucky stars above in destinies quest unfolding We all know our soul purpose love remains true there we see the snake that holds chains hurt Legion of cold icy rain runs down the cheeks demon your breath touches deep a fired memory Torturing a body heart and mind aches with grief Loveless my eyes just swam away lost direction Caught drifting on cloud nine of your breath frozen particles remain completely cold spawning new direction forward and out

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Date: 9/5/2016 7:28:00 PM
Beautiful poem Liam
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Date: 9/5/2016 6:10:00 PM
Hi Liam! Wow!Wow!This is a very sad, profound n' heartbreaking poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.So deeply sad n' heartfelt and I can feel your pain all the way in this piece too.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness and it makes me so very sad and it breaks my own heart in pieces just thinking of anyone hurting you in any way in the past, present or at any time Liam.Just praying here now more that you're really okay today and that no one has hurt you again in any way or form. Excellent piece!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot that you'll be really okay in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you here in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely day!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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