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Killing Me Again

“KILLING ME AGAIN” Once again there is none that may see anguish and hurt deep inside; With sparkling tears I’m killing my fears Removing all shame I try to hide The voices of doubt run their tirade as they rage shouting their blame; I’m killing my fears with sparkling tears Struggling to deal with unceasing pain He sees me trying to run away while He watches from above; With sparkling tears I’m killing my fears Drenching myself in His grace and love © Kim van Breda—May 2014 (My first attempt at a “ZaniLa Rhyme”—syllable count 9.7.9.9. Line three is a repeating internal rhyme with two parts swopped every stanza)

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Date: 5/11/2014 12:28:00 AM
Lovely poem!
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Date: 5/10/2014 8:28:00 AM
Very nicely penned Kim....hugs
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Date: 5/9/2014 7:41:00 AM
wow!!! this is a great one.. very clever lines.. magnificent and very creative.!!.. You are a great poet, Kim!!! :O)) I'm glad to know you... ^_^ thanks a lot!!
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Date: 5/9/2014 7:38:00 AM
Bravo Kim... excellent writing.. I love it... if thesis for a contest you should win... GOLD.. blessings Brooke
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Date: 5/6/2014 9:43:00 AM
I love the form and the content Kim...well done Tim
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Date: 5/6/2014 6:04:00 AM
- I've been on vacation - and not been "on line" for a while :)) - But back to read your poem today,dear Kim.- A touching and fine poem - well done in rhyme ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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