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Killer Love

Have you ever given your all just to fall , have you ever loved so much the pain leaves ripples in your heart , whenever you're apart , obsessed so you do your best , but your best never enough the world around so tough , clouded judgement as dangerous as rust , kicked to the curve over and over again , you look in the mirror you see the end , the eclipse in your eyes , tonight you'll die , the thoughts in your head , you already feel somewhat dead , you take one step back to look at the life you've wasted on her , wine drugs shes always in some pub , she's left you with the burden of not wanting to go on , you point the gun at your head , now you lay their its over finally im dead...

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Date: 1/19/2016 7:21:00 PM
CR RANCE, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 4/6/2015 5:32:00 PM
CR, about your poem: WOW, this reminds me of a song call THE END, from Blue October, he ends the song, with pointing the gun to himself, and all he saw after was black. :) Love is a KILLER.... :) I love it! I love it! XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 4/6/2015 5:31:00 PM
Cr Rance,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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