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Killer

I still see you suffer in the wake of all dreams That I have each time that I sleep Tears still fall from the heart of steel that I once had Its too late for me to offer you mine to give And it still makes me weep That it forced you against your will To live.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 7/12/2008 8:33:00 AM
Very deeply beautiful. Congrads on being featured. A very gifted expression, Sara:)
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Date: 7/9/2008 9:09:00 AM
Hello Alyssa A very deep heartfelt write. It really pulls at my heart strings. Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/9/2008 5:28:00 AM
Alyssa, congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2008 1:35:00 PM
Your feelings come through this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/8/2008 7:05:00 AM
Such powerful words. Very hard and precise, yet still with a hint of compassion in there. COngrats on being a featured poet this week. My best, Charlie
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Date: 7/7/2008 5:07:00 PM
Congrats on having your poem featured this week
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Date: 7/7/2008 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations Alyssa on the featuring of your well written poem "Killer." Vince
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Date: 7/6/2008 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week, sure is a hard hitting poem and very well written. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/6/2008 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations Alyssa on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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