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Kill the Shrill

there was a young man from Seville whose wife's voice was chillingly shrill he said please shut up he’d more than enough sending him looking for advil! (caveat: no endorsement of product intended)

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/10/2023 2:33:00 PM

HYSTERICAL, PANGIE

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/10/2023 2:55:00 PM

Glad you got a smile or a giggle Pangie! :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/31/2023 3:37:00 PM

Painless ending then Linda-Alice..You targeted This really well.'

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/31/2023 6:05:00 PM

Thank you Joe. My first iteration was not so benign. LOL :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/25/2023 9:09:00 PM

Ah yes, the will to be shrill.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/26/2023 6:32:00 AM

And the thrill of the kill. ;)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/25/2023 1:13:00 PM

The wife of the man who lives in Seville - Should take herself to the top of a hill - There she could shrill out loud - To every passing cloud - Far away from home to her hubby's thrill.….. Belle

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2023 1:46:00 PM

Hahaha Belle - right you are! Very cleverly written :)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/25/2023 8:15:00 AM

LOL, had a laugh at this one

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2023 8:36:00 AM

Glad you got a laugh Jack. Thanks for the visit and comment :)

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 3/24/2023 8:05:00 PM

Haha.. good one Linda! Thanks for the chuckle :-)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2023 6:02:00 AM

My pleasure Anne. Thanks for the read and comment :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/24/2023 6:52:00 PM

Ha! Who doesn't love a good limerick?Thanks for the smile, Alice:)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thank you dear. :) Alice

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/24/2023 6:12:00 PM

Oh sure. how much did they pay you? hehehehehehhe Excellent Limerick Linda. I am sure Rico would be proud of you. Keep em coming I miss reading good limericks. Best wishes Wen.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2023 6:18:00 PM

Hahahah WEn. ;);) Thank you for reading. I hope Rico has enjoyed as much as you have! :)