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Kill the Lights

Kill the lights, Disappearing within night. No one around to even care, It’s like you’re in a nightmare. The boogie mans after you, But then again there are a few. Looking back at all the pain, You realize nothing ever changed. Within this moment you start to stare, And realize that no one’s ever there. When you always seek for help, Everyone always seems to yelp. You never understand anything, But everything’s always oh so plain. You can’t help but be so distant, But no one knows at the instant. When you were raped, you lost your virginity, Your family, your all, and your identity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/3/2010 4:59:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write in poetry today .. hope u enjoy your time on the Soup and will check out the contest scene offered to members..good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/3/2010 3:14:00 AM
WOW! That's sent shivvers down my body!! I can see exactly where you're coming from - "When you always seek for help, Everyone always seems to yelp" - None can ever know your pain.. you wont let them, and it's got you tied up!! Write about the Daemons! Slay them with your pen and mind! You will never be able to laugth at it.. but you can defeat that pain. P.S thanks for your comment on my rhyme.
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Date: 11/2/2010 7:25:00 PM
it was a dream i had, nothing personal.
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Date: 11/2/2010 1:34:00 PM
Sentiments of pain for the raped one losing virginity and everything, such a painful state, Darylsue
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