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                boys
             tussle, roll
          pierce in pace
       toy-cycle in hand
                 lads


written 02-08-2013

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  1. Date: 8/8/2013 11:00:00 AM
    boys and their bikes! sweet Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 4:46:00 PM
    lovely write - must try this fun form

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Good morning Jenish, ha boys will be boys... love the poem... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 5:27:00 PM
    What those little boys can't find to get into can't be thought of..Enjoyed reading your description..Great job with the topic and form..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Nice one! I think it is cute to call them lads!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:22:00 AM
    - Nice poem, Jenish! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)