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Kids

I watch them play It is sweet this way They laugh and smile And see the great part of life for a while They love to pick on each other Well until they deal with thier mother It is a sweet thing to witness and just wait for the goodnight kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2009 6:53:00 PM
My dear Zach, such a lovely poem of fatherhood. :) Regarding 'faves' my friend, don't stress that nor should you value your poetry or your talents on it. I believe this community doesn't value a poet or their writing by 'faves' so much but more by the time they give in comments to let you know you are appreciated and being read. Relax and enjoy yourself :)
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:26:00 PM
Daddy, you are hooked ... kids are the drugs of a loving heart ... nice write.
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:42:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Zach. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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