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Kicking Super Hero

From where l live I see a silly monster Trying to tiptoe and dive At you as if it`s a star Quickly I move in and check Then like a super hero I aim and really kick It into a screaming zero! (N.B For Carol Eastman`s Superhero contest)

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 6:47:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/12/2014 5:13:00 PM

Dear Ndaba, you gave me a great laugh with this poem. I'm glad to see it placed in the contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/11/2014 9:13:00 AM

beautifully painted piece

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/11/2014 9:50:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and words of encouragement.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/10/2014 1:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/11/2014 9:08:00 AM

Thank you for your inspiring message.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2014 2:02:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Ndaba:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/11/2014 9:18:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. Much appreciated!

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 10/4/2014 10:53:00 AM

Thank you, Eileen.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/4/2014 10:31:00 AM

Good one, Ndaba...short and to the point...Hero style

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/3/2014 1:11:00 PM

I like it :) a wonderful poem, I hope it did well in the contest. Best wishes, Juli-Michelle

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/3/2014 4:07:00 PM

Thank you, Juli-Michelle.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2014 1:57:00 PM

What a delight, Ndaba! We all need some superheroes in our lives. Maybe you can kick away some of the evil doers. Surely, Carol will enjoy your poem! Love, Carolyn

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 9/1/2014 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn!