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I led the stubborn horse to water Couldn't make him drink as he oughta I swore and I cursed When he died of thirst Shoulda traded him for one smarter I buried the horse and bought a mule Again, I played the part of a fool It refused to drink So it made me think I should kick the ass into the pool!

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Date: 4/23/2024 11:32:00 AM
Enjoyed the funny Limerick.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/23/2024 5:30:00 PM
Thank you for finding them to your liking, Jay.
Date: 4/23/2024 2:37:00 AM
Was a sweet treat of humour to enjoy at the end of the day...clever write dear Lin.
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Date: 4/23/2024 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, Paul. It was written in a moment or two of utter silliness. ;-)
Date: 4/22/2024 3:49:00 PM
Hilarious...brought a smile to my face. I appreciate the light read this evening. Have a pleasant one, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/22/2024 4:04:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. After the maudlin harp music and the creepy raven, something light was due.
Date: 4/22/2024 12:22:00 PM
- Yes, you should :))) - hugs
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Date: 4/22/2024 12:39:00 PM
;-) Hi, Anne-Lise. Thanks for the read and comments. I've not been around much lately.

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