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Kibitzer

Keeps a foot in all camps Knows all that goes around Keg of wisdom he touts Keenly lends advice to Kin and strangers till they Kick and shut him out. Then Kaput go his designs Written on:03/09/2017

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Date: 3/14/2017 4:16:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Sara :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/13/2017 5:25:00 PM
A unique subject, and you did a great job of depicting it, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/10/2017 7:52:00 PM
Sara. This is really cool, even though I still don't know what a kibitzer is! I think you picked a very original one that nobody else will do! Good job.
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Date: 3/9/2017 7:12:00 PM
That poor kibitzer should stop kibitzing so much! Clever write for theme; G/L in the contest! Enjoyed!~Che :)
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Date: 3/9/2017 2:31:00 PM
Fun!
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Date: 3/9/2017 1:20:00 PM
quite unique and a good one at that, sara... win it!..huggs
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Date: 3/9/2017 12:19:00 PM
Brings a sense of sadness Sara...beautiful work
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Date: 3/9/2017 10:19:00 AM
Awesome! 7 xomo!
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:49:00 AM
You had me at keg of wisdom and then the sad ending sobered me up. I can see this now and I can feel it. This was excellent.
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