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Khan

I thought I felt the warmth of your heart gentle and charming You stand before me like a thought, a dream remembered in a dream I want you to think of me as we are sometimes miles apart Without you, my world is a dark place in time I want you to remember secrets whispered in your ear, and smile You are the sunshine of my day a star that is always bright I have loved you more with each passing day What I'd give to wake up beside you each sunrise I love you completely with my heart, mind, and soul As you remember me, smile with peace in your heart You are my favorite dream that has become my reality

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/8/2013 2:46:00 PM
Lucky guy
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/8/2013 5:48:00 PM
Thank you for reading John ;}
Date: 12/29/2012 8:32:00 PM
Sweet words of love and longing... your couplet construction is perfect for this kind of piece. APPLAUSE!!! Keith
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/29/2012 9:20:00 PM
Thank you Keith ;}
Date: 12/21/2012 10:33:00 PM
Debbie, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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Date: 9/19/2012 7:45:00 AM
this is beautiful!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/23/2012 8:01:00 PM
Thank you ;}
Date: 9/14/2012 8:07:00 AM
Goodness, Debbie! What a tender and evocative poem of deep and abiding romance...who would not relish such words of affection and promise composed to them? As alluring and captivating as this gorgeous work is, M'Dear, it is not a blank verse poem. Blank verse is composed entirely in iambic pentameter, as a sonnet is, without the rhymes, of course. Regardless, I love it, and what man with a beating heart would not? Smiles and most grateful hugs! ~ Richard
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/14/2012 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Richard for reading my words ;},,,, and thank you for the info on the poem/ what it is.
Date: 6/26/2012 6:24:00 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you Debbie. Love and blessings, Carol
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/26/2012 2:09:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poems Carol,,,,, Yes I very well know how it is getting behind on things,,,, may the angels always surround you you and bless you Carol ;}
Date: 6/24/2012 2:16:00 PM
Reminds me of a Fleetwood Mac song withe the lyrics"Dreams unwind - Love's a state of mind". Fine work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/13/2012 10:51:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 5/24/2012 5:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one this eve..Very expressive and emotive work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 5/23/2012 6:05:00 AM
great poetry here babe...
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Don Johnson
Date: 6/6/2012 12:06:00 AM
you are blest with happiness, when you aint alone:)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 5/23/2012 11:31:00 AM
why thank you Don ;}
Date: 5/22/2012 3:56:00 PM
a wonderful poem!
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Date: 5/20/2012 3:20:00 PM
Lovely written poem Debbie, wish you luck in love. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 5/20/2012 5:45:00 PM
Hello Anne,,, words from an old letter ;} you have a blessed day,,, and thank you for reading !
Date: 5/20/2012 1:04:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem very much.A passionate write.Is he from India?
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