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Keyhole of Light

Dark and weathered you feel confused I knock on your heart but you won't let me through If privacy is granted you won't see the light I can still see a keyhole don't give up the fight It pains me to see you without a window of hope I can't handle the nails that drive your slate home Lets restore your foundation and give it new life Veneer will protect you I will find the best knight The lock is against us please give me the key I beg you I love you please listen to me.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/14/2018 2:11:00 AM

Very powerful poem. Heart wrenching piece. Well done, Carol. Wish you the best.

Reginald Telemacque

Date: 1/9/2018 3:38:00 PM

This is an amazing piece.. I really love this poem.. The key to life

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/24/2017 3:23:00 PM

I am late to find is gem but the fine pleasure in reading this poem is still the same. I know about begging to be allowed to help someone I loved. She was addicted to drugs and I was not allowed in to help. Love this plea and its depth and beauty. A fav..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2017 5:34:00 PM

Just going through your best poems list to find something. Anyway, I saw this one before but to let you know, it's number eight on the list!

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/19/2017 5:30:00 PM

Cool poem. Yes, there is always hope as long as your still alive.

Daver Austin

Date: 12/6/2016 2:00:00 PM

Keyhole is a great idea. Love the images. Love, daver

Carol B.
Date: 1/14/2017 3:29:00 PM

Thanks! Daver I hope you're feeling better.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2016 8:17:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one, CArol, and thanks for visiting Daver with your get well wishes.

Carol B.
Date: 12/1/2016 10:34:00 PM

Andrea you have a very caring heart. I hope Daver gets better soon. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/19/2016 9:07:00 PM

A plea through the keyhole! Where light resides there is still hope :)

Carol B.
Date: 11/19/2016 9:13:00 PM

Kim, I totally agree :) Thanks for the lovely comment.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/17/2016 3:54:00 AM

Excellent. Very passionate write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Carol B.
Date: 11/17/2016 10:18:00 AM

Thanks so much Ravi :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/16/2016 4:05:00 PM

You gave us pathos in a gentle verse, well done my poetic friend..Welcome to poetry soup

Carol B.
Date: 11/16/2016 4:47:00 PM

Frederic thank you for the warm welcome and the wonderful comment :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/15/2016 6:28:00 PM

Your idea of light coming through the keyhole is very creative to visualize Caro.A very lovely poem. ; ) 7 soup mail

Carol B.
Date: 11/15/2016 10:14:00 PM

Connie, So happy you liked the poem :)

Unknown Unknown

Date: 11/15/2016 3:08:00 AM

Amazing poem, its speaks right to ones heart. Love your work. -Unknown

Carol B.
Date: 11/15/2016 4:04:00 PM

Thanks so much for your lovely comment :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/14/2016 10:01:00 PM

I came to read this again, and also in the hope of reading more! :)

Carol B.
Date: 11/15/2016 5:25:00 PM

Such a sweet thing to say Arthur :) Thanks!!

Daver Austin

Date: 11/14/2016 10:41:00 AM

This keyhole of light reminds me of a Greek myth - Two lovers that can only connect looking through a crack in the rock. Good stuff. Love, daver

Carol B.
Date: 11/14/2016 10:49:00 AM

Thanks so much Daver your comment is really appreciated. I love what you took from this poem :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/11/2016 10:13:00 PM

If only I knew someone as you! This poem is a 7!!

Carol B.
Date: 11/12/2016 3:22:00 PM

Arthur that is so very kind of you to say! Thanks :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/11/2016 9:07:00 PM

A definite 7, bravo!

Carol B.
Date: 11/12/2016 3:19:00 PM

Thanks so much Richard :)

Daver Austin

Date: 11/11/2016 11:53:00 AM

Surely this heart felt plea will succeed. Love, daver

Carol B.
Date: 11/11/2016 2:21:00 PM

Daver I sure hope so :) Thanks!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/10/2016 4:57:00 PM

Very passionate poem, Carol. It touches the soul w/such emotion. Beautifully written poem. I really loved this poem. Love and peace to you, lady.

Carol B.
Date: 11/10/2016 5:00:00 PM

Thanks Freddie :) Love and peace to you as well!

Jannie Breedt

Date: 11/10/2016 1:09:00 PM

The frustration when they wont let you in!

Carol B.
Date: 11/10/2016 1:28:00 PM

So very true Jannie. Thanks!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2016 2:49:00 AM

- A lovely poem, with touching emotions Carol - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol B.
Date: 11/10/2016 1:26:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/9/2016 5:10:00 PM

This was absolutely beautiful Carol. This is so touching because I can feel your heart reaching for that special loved one, longing to help, needing to be let in. So deep with love and affection.

Carol B.
Date: 11/9/2016 5:18:00 PM

Chris, Thanks so much for the comment. It's difficult feeling helpless. Worst feeling ever.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/9/2016 5:03:00 PM

What a lovely and sincere imploration, Carol! Your words should not fail to encourage and help provide a much needed push! ~ Regards // paul

Carol B.
Date: 11/9/2016 5:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul. It's tough when you love someone and they shut you out especially when they need you most.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2016 3:55:00 PM

So sweet this is, Carol. You have a wonderful spirit.

Carol B.
Date: 11/9/2016 4:01:00 PM

Andrea that is one of the nicest things anyone has every said to me. Thanks so much :) Your comment has brightened my day!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/9/2016 3:19:00 PM

An emotional and powerful write. A Fav.

Carol B.
Date: 11/9/2016 3:42:00 PM

Thanks for the comment and your continued support it means a great deal to me :)