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Key Lock To My Broken Heart

My heart is locked with so much pain black tear drops fall from my face every tear drop leaves a puddle with a memory that's hiding from space stocked away behind my soul shattered to pieces with no where to go locked away to never get out to see the good side of my broken heart

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Daniel Turner

Date: 11/2/2016 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup web page, Tori. It seems someone below has accused you of stealing. hopefully you can get that worked out.

Patricia C.

Date: 11/1/2016 2:00:00 AM

This not your poem am sorry I wrote that in 2011 this not your poem you have no rights too say you wrote this this is the original owner of poem.

Stephen Pennell

Date: 10/30/2016 12:35:00 PM

shows real emotion look forward to reading more stephen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2016 10:42:00 AM

Tori B, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tori Brock
Date: 10/27/2016 11:38:00 AM

Thank you so much! One of my friends recommended poetry soup to me. I thought I would give it a try and I am already in love with it. Also thank you for reading my poems, and I think your poems are amazing. Thank you again - Tori B

Leahann Fraser

Date: 10/27/2016 8:34:00 AM

This is some good shit boi

Anastasia Denny

Date: 10/27/2016 6:39:00 AM

very beautiful tori.. i love this welcome to poetrysoup-Ana

Moon Flower

Date: 10/26/2016 12:02:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Tori. :)

Tori Brock
Date: 10/26/2016 4:56:00 PM

Thanks a lot Moon Flower :)