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Keeping Still The fire has burned low my love. I dare not move to fix it. You have fallen asleep against my chest. I feel you breathing. I hear air, moving… in and out… as you slumber. Your hair is a wave of brown, like a warm blanket, the only comparison, a treasure my grandmother, would have made by hand. You smell of the earth. The trees and the outside, have come inside with you. We hiked all morning, and now… they are a pleasant memory, swaying my senses as I sit holding you close, in my arms. The fire has burned low my love. I dare not move to fix it.

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Date: 11/18/2019 2:47:00 PM
A gorgeous missive, Ann.
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Date: 11/17/2019 11:44:00 PM
A moment of joy, beautifully penned..
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/18/2019 10:38:00 AM
Thank you so kindly. Ann
Date: 11/17/2019 10:17:00 PM
I love this. A tender moment capured beautifully.
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/17/2019 10:21:00 PM
I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words. Ann
Date: 11/17/2019 10:17:00 PM
Just love the intimate feel of your poems. I'm right into the heart of the poem as soon as I start reading--a tribute to the imagery you create to appeal so deeply to the five senses. Bravo, Ann! Cheers, Gershon
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/17/2019 10:21:00 PM
Oh you are a perfect poet, you sweet talker. Thank you so kindly. Your words lift my heart and make me want to write again... Ann

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