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Keeper's Vivid Cove

Corridor of light Fiery spring called seaward From foam to glory

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest John. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 6:14:00 PM

Congratulations John an awesome proem presentation, a win for you to enjoy. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2010 1:58:00 PM

Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest... perfect words for the photo and great win for u..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Rick Parise

Date: 4/22/2010 1:40:00 PM

congrats!!!!!!!!!!Nice one~~~Rick

Kim M

Date: 4/22/2010 1:34:00 PM

Oh! I adore this most elegant version! Every word is fantastic. I especially admire the imagery of "fiery spring called seaward" and "corridor of light". Perfect word choices.

Date: 4/22/2010 1:29:00 PM

The scene comes to life through your words. Congratulations on placing third in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your big honor. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2010 12:45:00 PM

John, congratulations on placing 3rd in my contest...Raul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/21/2010 9:52:00 PM

A fine haiku with nice images