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Keep Our Ghosts At Bay

I feel your pain like it was mine Having an ability to see your soul If you hurt and can't speak Sit here with me for I am fluent in silence And if your ghosts from the past leave you sleepless then know that I will be there to watch over you taking the first shift so Sleep will go undisturbed Our tragedy in life is not death but what we let die inside of us Remember that you do not only live once we die once but we live everyday we only need one friend who will be there for us always regardless keeping our ghosts at bay when we feel we can't go on To allow us to rest when we are too weak 2nd place Contest:Your best free verse from 2019' Sponsor:John Hamilton Date:10/4/2019

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Bryan Norton

Date: 7/26/2020 9:08:00 PM

This was a very nice poem, I thought. Very sweet, very well written, very nice sentiment. This would be a favorite in a popular anthology of poems. Meaning, that this has the broad appeal missing from a lot of poetry, in my opinion. I guess that's why you are a popular contest poet, and deserve to be. Good night.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 9:15:00 PM

Thank you so much! I appreciate your words!:)

Matt Coffelt

Date: 3/21/2020 2:03:00 AM

I’m fascinated with this one! I can feel the words as if you were explaining my thoughts. Great work! P.S. I have been writing since I was 16 and 42 years old now. I’ve got notebooks full and I’m trying to get my work out there in order for people to be able to enjoy them as much as I can possibly help them to

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 9:16:00 PM

You should get your words out because everyone always has words worth reading! Sorry it’s taken me so long to get back to you!;)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/7/2020 10:13:00 PM

Blessings and congrats on your win in John's contest, Brenda - keep on writing, my friend, and thank you for sharing. Blessings! :o) <3

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/8/2020 12:48:00 PM

Thank you Gregory much appreciated!;)

John Watt

Date: 1/5/2020 6:27:00 PM

Would that we all had a friend so faithful. What a beautiful poem, Brenda. I particularly like "Sit here with me for I am fluent in silence" and "you do not only live once / we die once but we live everyday". Two great quotes in one poem. This is a fav for me, congratulations on the win ~ John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/6/2020 12:12:00 AM

Thank you John so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!;)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2020 3:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2020 6:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/5/2020 1:34:00 PM

Look... look... who's up there with the best of them...wow Brenda this is my fave write of yours, congrats on a top win for 2019!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2020 1:36:00 PM

Thank you so much John!;)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/28/2019 5:00:00 PM

Our tragedy in life is not death but we let die with in us ! Brilliant. Really liked this poem!! Favourite!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 1:24:00 PM

Thank you so much!;)

John Fleming

Date: 10/24/2019 10:23:00 AM

Super poetry, Brenda! Actually, now I come to think some more on it, this would make a truly nice sort of goodnight prayer...it has that quiet, steadfast, unyielding sense of inner strength and resolve about it all. Really lovely piece of writing this -- in admiration! :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 1:25:00 PM

Yes it would John ganks for your never ending support!;) all my affection!;)

Nick Trim

Date: 10/21/2019 7:03:00 AM

wise words, very good

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/21/2019 11:31:00 AM

Ahhh muppet thank you!;)

Mark Longson

Date: 10/14/2019 1:33:00 PM

Awesome! Sums up a friend wonderfully. Thank you for writing, love it.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/14/2019 4:25:00 PM

Mark thank you so much for your wonderful comment!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/11/2019 2:55:00 PM

Amazing, Brenda! 'You die once, but you live every day.' Words for me and for everyone to live by. Love it! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/14/2019 4:25:00 PM

Gershon you are far too kind but I am grateful for your visits ! Thank you so much!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/10/2019 11:15:00 AM

This has got to be your best write yet, faving of course. Too many great lines to quote, but like the others fluent in silence really stuck out.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/10/2019 11:41:00 AM

Thanks so much John I really appreciate your comments!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2019 8:30:00 PM

wow, I love this one. And this line is amazing: I am fluent in silence FAVE

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/9/2019 3:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea!;)

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/6/2019 2:44:00 PM

Wow! Brenda this is everything I try to say to my children who have been through so much but you have put it so beautifully, if beautiful is a strong enough word! I absolutely adore this :-) xx

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/6/2019 3:14:00 PM

Elaine thank you! I have been through a lot but seemed I always had a bad who would just sit with me! We never said a thing it's like we k ew what the other thought! Thank you so very much!;)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 10/6/2019 8:05:00 AM

Not just one word or one sentence Brenda. I loved every letter of this masterpiece. This is my instant fave. This gave me a sense of confidence that someone is really there listening and comforting. Kudos to your pen !!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/6/2019 3:13:00 PM

Swetha thank you so very much! That is so nice of you!;)

P.S. Awtry

Date: 10/5/2019 9:40:00 AM

“I am fluent in silence”—that is a gift! Comforting encouraging piece. :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/5/2019 7:09:00 PM

Thank you PS I appreciate your comments!;)

Constance La France

Date: 10/4/2019 2:10:00 PM

Brenda, WOW, now this is a beautiful and inspiring poem. I love each line!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/4/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thank you so much just s bit melancholy of late and feeling this way and hoping I have one like it!;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/4/2019 1:10:00 PM

It is nice to have a friend you can count on. Really nicely done Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/4/2019 2:15:00 PM

Yep it is! Always!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/4/2019 9:42:00 AM

beautifully penned Brenda :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/4/2019 11:58:00 AM

Sandra thank you so much! I need to over to read you been having a few bad days but I'm working on it!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/4/2019 6:18:00 AM

Sweet and lovely. I lean on Jesus, my best friend... I've never discovered a better one, although you are a wonderful friend with beautiful words. Bless you with many more lovely words.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/4/2019 11:57:00 AM

Regina thank you so very much! God bless!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/4/2019 5:05:00 AM

You had me at “I am fluent in silent” if more people could just sit with someone, we would have far fewer ghosts. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/4/2019 11:57:00 AM

Thank you Rick that is so true! I have found silence is a healing thing st times! You are too kind!;)