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Keep Me Safe Moon

So dark and scary out there tonight I can always rely on the bright moon Keeps me safe as I walk home alone Halloween moon don't leave me soon Halloween moon contest by Eve Roper 10 OCt

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/22/2015 3:03:00 AM

Sarah, I like the idea of the light of the moon giving you protection. What a great entry. Congratulations on your win!

James Inman

Date: 10/21/2015 8:21:00 AM

Sarah, you took the good moon route. Too many scary things out there as it is. Lovely poem.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/21/2015 12:10:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Sarah!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2015 10:59:00 PM

Sarah,congratulations on your wonderful win and thank you for participating in my contest. Eve

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/20/2015 10:47:00 PM

PS- And congrats on your first win on Poetry soup! Double WooHoo! Viv x

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/20/2015 10:46:00 PM

On Halloween, everyone feels creepy, but you find comfort in the moon. A nice take on the theme, Sarah, and congrats on your win! Woo! Viv x