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Kat

Blonde curls frame a picture Painted with acrylic Ballet slipper pink lips A blinding smile Flashes at me in my dark days. She understands enough to know Not to understand me. Brambles tear at her wanderings Her soul whispers painstaking Goodbyes. And she thought I didn't notice. Her mind is a Van Gogh Not quite Irises More of a vast Starry Night Full of complicated swirls and spirals A mix of blue and white. She wields her untamed mind like a dagger. Sunset streaked skies form in her eye And she paints them with thread. Red wine and fusha scales Interlocking Like the ghost of her laugh that echoes Over every joke shared She's a kaleidoscope, Fiery pastelles and tumbling emotions Hell bent on perfection. She builds her own rocket ships to the stars Made of broken dreams, Unfinished stories, Iridescent memory. She is loud, A thunder of opinion. I know better than to tempt her storm I always do And lighting strikes. She dances with flame, For they are jealous of her spark. She's a lipgloss wonder With eyelashes reaching for the moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/28/2017 7:49:00 AM
Iris, I agree with everything Chris says below me. All these lines, I could start quoting beautiful phrases, and not stop.... Oh Iris, this is simply wonderful!
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Iris Blade
Date: 4/28/2017 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much! I love describing people throught poetry. The only way I know how to paint is with words and I hope her personality and what she looks like came through. I sent this to my father, and he had requested me to do one describing him. I told him I'll be writing one soon.
Date: 4/28/2017 6:05:00 AM
I am just so in awe of your writing style. The creativity, the word and phrase choices, the matter of fact feeling in the expressions. You are very talented. This poem just blew me away. I sat here wanting to pick out a few lines to highlight, but there are too many. I really enjoyed this poem. I really like your style.
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Iris Blade
Date: 4/28/2017 10:21:00 AM
Thank you so much! I am very happy you liked it. A lot of love went into this poem and I think it showed. When I showed her this, she said her favorite lines were 'Hell bent on perfection' and the last two. I've know her for most of my life and, without a doubt, she is an amazing friend.

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