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Kardia Thief

This story is as old as time But it feels new to me A girl to whom I'd give the world But it will never be. Why is it that I have no say In what my heart desires My sadomasochistic mind Which starts internal fires. My subconscious is mocking me And laughing at my sorrow It ceases for the shortest time Just to return tomorrow. I try to shake this futile dream But I can't help this feeling Inside my heart Which part, by part She's unconsciously stealing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/31/2016 8:54:00 PM
TOM, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 11/23/2012 7:20:00 AM
Tom, a big wecome, I like this a lot, keep writing..David
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Date: 6/9/2012 7:29:00 AM
Looking for new poetry from you Tom. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:46:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Date: 6/6/2012 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, it really means a lot to me that someone appreciates my work. This is the first and only poem I have every written, but with the positive feedback I've had I will definitely be starting another one soon. Thanks again.
Date: 5/31/2012 11:34:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tom. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:24:00 AM
Tom, I like this..David
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:56:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Tom, hope you will write, read and comments back alot of poem here. Have fun with poetry. You have a very well written poem today, I like it alot.- Sending you a hug from Norway and me Anne-Lise - Have a beautiful day in sunshine.
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