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Kamara

Kamara’s a chameleon At full, wan face beams halcyon Morphing ocean’s jet to silver Aquatic waves in praise, glitter ~ Kamara is night’s magician A sliver scooping attention Reaching forth, makes ocean shiver Adoring waves in foam, fritter ~ Kamara’s a swirling dancer A sky quarter-turning prancer Magic skirt lifts ocean’s quiver Ardent waves raise starry flitters ~ Kamara’s seawater’s lover A ghost yearning liquid’s cover, rills as an argent river Aquatic waves in praise, glitter ~ (9/7/2022)

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Date: 10/1/2022 10:10:00 AM
You write so beautifully about the ocean. here is yet another example of it.
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 11/9/2022 7:21:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/27/2022 7:19:00 PM
Kamara's mystique, wrapped in mist and mystery! Lovely penned, Susan! Light and Illumination, Gershon
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/28/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/20/2022 4:52:00 PM
Hi Susan, Quite an outstanding beautiful write. Making this a FAV! Pangie xx
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/20/2022 8:06:00 PM
Hi Pangie! Thank you very much Glad you like it :)
Date: 9/8/2022 10:25:00 PM
Very evocative, I like the swirling dancer one the best!
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/8/2022 10:33:00 PM
Thank you I just made a little modification to the last line after rereading it :)

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