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Kaliedoscope

Thinking of this girl who wanted to elope Asking me, do you want to tie the knot It felt like I was lost in this kaleidoscope Still I'd ask myself is she the one or not Its like I have slipped down this slope And into the valley of death, I now rot But trying the best that I can to cope If I don’t go dool,ally and lose the plot It felt like I was lost in this kaleidoscope Their were many things between us a lot But then, I could have been a bit of a dope Until gone, do we realise what we had got Though there was a time I did have hope I was happy as Larry, now it's sqidly sqott And now all one seems to do is just mope With the baggage I carry, me David Scott Bits of this were fom a poem I wrote back in 2005 called where do I go from here another interpretation of a past time with ex written june 2012.......................... INSPIERD BY FRIENDS GROUP CONVERSATIONS AT THESE TIMES ITS HOW IT FELT AT TIMES iM SURE iVE MENTIONED IN ALOT OF MY OTHER WRITES this has been reedited as I felt over the place before this time in better context which been trying to do with others not i was trying t keep to a pattern also with words in between to keep flow but still keep sense of what im talking about

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Date: 5/27/2014 4:27:00 PM
I found this to be well put together, but, at times, truly a labor to read. You have a unique style that is addictive and always worth the time to read. Great work..... Jake
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Date: 4/29/2014 1:52:00 PM
DAVID. ..... URGENT SOUP MAIL
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