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Kaleidoscopic

In childhood, we saw our tiny world in brightest kaleidoscopic shades. There were no greys, only brilliant swirls of colors that formed vibrant parades and danced among peridot-green blades. Our days were varicolored landscapes of flowers, many sizes and shapes. We created our secret pathways dropping blossoms to find our escapes Childhood's rare world of halcyon days. As poets, we long to find those times of innocence and wonders unknown. We sprinkle colors into our rhymes But gardens of youth have overgrown and grey slipped in at edges unsown. At a fair, is a man making grand "Kaleidoscopes: Their View Is At Hand!" As myriad colors of glass spill, I catch my breath as designs expand in hues of a world I long for still. March 10, 2023 for "Word Challenge--K Words Contest" by Constance La France howmanysyllables: 9 First Place

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Date: 4/4/2023 6:07:00 AM
I have read your winner in Constance's contest and found it interesting. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 4/3/2023 3:25:00 PM
Ann, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/13/2023 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Ann. What a beautiful and lovely poem. Blessings
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/15/2023 9:47:00 AM
How kind of you, Lasaad! And thanks for the blessings.
Date: 3/13/2023 2:00:00 PM
- Lovely conjuring with colors, Ann :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/13/2023 12:48:00 PM
Just back with congratulations!
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/15/2023 9:41:00 AM
Thanks again, Dilly :) I appreciate it!
Date: 3/13/2023 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I also loved the "Kaleidoscopic" with the many fun colors. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/15/2023 9:40:00 AM
Thanks, Paula. I would love to have one today, I think. :)
Date: 3/11/2023 8:52:00 AM
I always loved peering into the tube and admiring the patters.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/11/2023 10:25:00 AM
I simply loved those colorful designs, each different! Thanks for commenting, Victor.
Date: 3/11/2023 8:39:00 AM
Yes as poets we try to recapture the colors of our childhood imagination, love your lines 'colors that formed vibrant parades' and 'myriad colors of glass spill' - don't we all still long for them~
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/11/2023 10:22:00 AM
Yes, I think we do. As a child, I was mesmerized for hours by my kaleidoscope. I think I learned to love colors then. Thank you, Michelle, for liking those lines! I changed a line following "parade," that I should have kept. Ah, well...
Date: 3/11/2023 1:40:00 AM
Wonderful - a clear winner
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/11/2023 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dilly!

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