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Kaleidoscope

Swirls ,twirls. kaleidoscopes of color Dreams and schemes the whole night long Ideas unleashed, boundaries unknown The winds of frenzy blow so strong.. Keep turning the wheel..yet one more time My kaleidoscope gives another scene Seeds of insanity.. tumbling shades of red Looking and looking .. what can it mean Hoping that reality does not preclude The kaleidoscope of dreams I view The madness masked in deepest sleep Turn to brilliance? I wish I knew...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/20/2010 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 10/20/2010 7:57:00 AM

Great write, Barbara. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

James Fraser

Date: 10/20/2010 6:14:00 AM

I so remember playing with one when I was younger Barbara, and I would marvel at the colours and shapes. Many congratulations on your fine win in Nikko's contest >> James :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/20/2010 3:21:00 AM

Wow Barbara, I love this write of yours.. Congratulations on your win ;) Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/19/2010 9:24:00 PM

many congratulations for this lovely win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2010 7:38:00 PM

wow, way to go . I see Kaleidoscope is a very popular word in this contest and Nikko loves those kaeidoscope poems! Congratulations on your own unique approach to kaleidoscope, Barbara!

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/19/2010 12:05:00 PM

Wow! Just brilliant ! congratulations on your win Barbara..funny we both picked kaleidoscope! take care~Deb

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/19/2010 10:44:00 AM

lovely piece Barabara, congrats on your win in the contest

John Freeman

Date: 10/19/2010 9:29:00 AM

"Congratulations Barbara!" A worthy poem for 4th place. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/19/2010 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/19/2010 7:59:00 AM

love this one Barbara!! You turned the kaleidoscope into a whirlwind of a poem...a winner indeed!! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/19/2010 7:50:00 AM

Gee, I wonder how I missed this one, dear LNC. It's very intriguing. Excellent work. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/19/2010 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Barbara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2010 6:56:00 AM

I have to tell you, I was really loving the kaleidoscope entries! and this one was just so vivid and profound--brilliant indeed-- super congrats Barbara with your magnificent kaleidoscope! -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/19/2010 5:56:00 AM

Congrats BG on a super big win in Nikko's K contest ..with this excellent piece so vivid and very visual .. enjoyed every line luv...

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 10/14/2010 2:45:00 PM

Such a wonderful flow of words that made a great read.Thanks for the very nice comment.Teresa

David Smalling

Date: 10/1/2010 5:36:00 AM

The madness masked in deepest sleep ... does not only tell the theme of this imagination, but captures something I wrote in a mail to Thvia today, about poetry being a search for meaning. I will tell Thvia to read this ... and exalt you to the honored list of those who feel in thought, and bring great richness to this place ... great write, Barbara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/28/2010 11:54:00 AM

This is so cool, love the images shown in this clever write..always Michael