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Kaimuki Coffee

Coffee drips Down the face of my cup: My mind wanders

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2016 12:07:00 PM

Lovely imagery - I am a tea person myself:-) :-) I would classify it as a senryu rather than a haiku:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2016 5:29:00 PM

Well I've learned something now Jim never heard of American haiku then again when I started writing there were many forms I had never heard of at all - thanks for your feedback :-) hugs Jan xx

Ijm Seven
Date: 6/18/2016 12:17:00 PM

Thank you I would classify this as a modern American haiku in line with Kerouac haiku style I truly appreciate your feedback as I enjoy so many of your writes.