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Juvenilia

know that they’ll love you for the work you do when you’re young, that they will embrace the anger, the passion, the want to change the world--- know that they will circle round you like they do when there is a fight in the public square, watching the two beat each other senseless, if even to death & then they’ll go about their merry way--- because a life of work means absolutely nothing until you are dead & to those that get recognized at all for doing anything anymore come the glitz & the glam of momentary success, but the rotting comes quick & like a mole trying to get out of a dog’s concave water dish with feet scampering up the sides, blinded to the reality of its coming demise, the fall is inevitable--- here today & gone tomorrow, as a leper deteriorating away on an island far off from the spotlight that started it all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2012 4:33:00 PM
When reading this I at first notice that an apostraphe is needed on the first word 'its' - should be 'it's' and cap the 'I'. I believe you mean to use the word 'are' instead of the word 'or' on the 3rd line. Cap the 'g' in the word 'God' . On the 6th line the word 'there' should be 'their' and the word 'shear' should be 'shed'. the 8th line - 2nd word I think you mean 'it' instead of 'ir'. Hope this helps.
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