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Just You and I

Lying in bed Just you and I Closed off from the world outside Just as it should be Raindrops gently falling Dancing on the window pane We are wrapped tightly in the arms of our love No words are needed the silence is understood There is a sense of peace in knowing that all is right In the world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/22/2014 11:01:00 AM
I love the feeling I got after reading this poem of yours Jennifer...you should definitely post more.
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Jennifer Turner
Date: 9/22/2014 11:44:00 AM
Thank you...your comment is much appreciated. :-)
Date: 1/30/2014 8:37:00 AM
Nice poem, Jennifer. The sense of romance honestly expressed. Great choice of words. Enjoyable overall. Check out my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Jennifer Turner
Date: 1/30/2014 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Jiril. I will definitely check out your poems too!

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