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Just Yesturday

Your voice, your smile, everything you do. At first is thought this would never work out... I thought we would never last, with out a dough. But i think I'm staring to see what no one else could that is what it seemed... No one else would, we are perfect for each other. For all the time's you make me cry, and walk away saying good bye... I care for you, and for us. You can't tell me That this was just last... All those night's under the stars, now you are away. And for the next time I fall in love with you... Out of the blue things about it. Next time you hurt a men (or woman)... You just might destroy his ( her ) whole world. With all my heart.... Gabriel Melendez

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Date: 5/7/2011 1:44:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. The last stanza leaves the reader with a message to think about. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:26:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Gabriel. I will be back again to read more. Please continue to write and share your poetry with us. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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