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Just Wondering

Are my words confuseing Do they leave your heart ringing Are my points dulled by my rhyme Making reading them a waste of time Do they fall off the page Are they just too vague I try to be simple and straight With words that don't agitate I try to encourage with good advice By shareing the lessons I've learned in my life I hope that you enjoy what you read I hope that I have given you something you need To be of help is my only wish Not to write poems that stink like a fish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/8/2011 7:46:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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