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Just wondering

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Just wondering

Are my words confuseing 
Do they leave your heart ringing

Are my points dulled by my rhyme
Making reading them a waste of time

Do they fall off the page 
Are they just too vague

I try to be simple and straight
With words that don't agitate

I try to encourage with good advice
By shareing the lessons I've learned in my life

I hope that you enjoy what you read
I hope that I have given you something you need

To be of help is my only wish
Not to write poems that stink like a fish

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  1. Date: 1/8/2011 7:46:00 PM
    Very nice poem...Jimmy