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Just Within Reach

Just within reach - if only I could dare to pluck that fruit! A luscious peach or pear? No, not one of these! Metaphorically I’m speaking! Like a bauble on a tree, he brightly sparkled, beautiful and rare. His eyes and lips were tender, and his hair - smooth onyx framing one sweet face so fair! That precious night I found sheer poetry just within reach. To think I touched that face and loved to stare at it, imagining the life we’d share perhaps one day . . . but it was not to be. My fondest dream had possibility till circumstance replaced what had been there just within reach!

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Date: 4/27/2015 12:10:00 AM
Hey Andrea, what a nicely done rondeau - congratulations!
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:49:00 PM
Andrea, , Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 4/24/2015 4:22:00 PM
He who hesitates is lost. Can't remember who said that, but some moments are breathless, they just can't linger.
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Date: 4/22/2015 10:05:00 PM
Nicely done Andrea, congrats :)
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:29:00 PM
How many of us have such a story as this one...and how different life would have been if we had been able to achieve that reach. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/21/2015 5:33:00 PM
I love the form you used here Andrea - a wonderful write - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx 7 xx
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Date: 4/21/2015 5:26:00 PM
Andrea , a wonderful write a 7 and congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 4/21/2015 4:25:00 PM
Wonderful write Andrea..congrats on the win
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:33:00 AM
Andrea, this is a testament to the "fickle finger of fate" and its meddling nature. Enjoyed this one and its different texture and flow. thanks for playing.
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Date: 4/19/2015 5:28:00 AM
beautiful romantic write, my friend
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Date: 4/18/2015 12:25:00 PM
Reach out? Yes, but touch doesn't explore the in inner person, eh? This one goes deeper than mere words. Good stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 4/17/2015 2:43:00 AM
this is a superb poem Andrea gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 4/16/2015 3:43:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara
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Date: 4/16/2015 3:17:00 PM
Very nice Andrea. You drew the picture with such skill.. Just within reach.. that something which actually could never be reached. Vivid imagination dear. :)
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Date: 4/16/2015 2:17:00 PM
This is an awesome Rondeau Andrea. And trust me, I've had plenty of time to study some of the forms being used by some of our favorite poets here on the Soup. This is a winner in my judgement ! If anything, you will be way up there ....heck ! I say *Winnier* *smiles* Great write dear poet ! Loved it ! Have a wonderful week my friend.....much love, james
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Date: 4/16/2015 9:27:00 AM
It is a real pleasure to read such poems! I hope you win, you deserve it, yiu are just within reach!
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Date: 4/16/2015 9:01:00 AM
Lost love...a story beautifully told.
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:44:00 AM
Reminds me of the song by the Temptations - "Just my Imagination" - do you know that tune? I wish you luck in the contest poetic maiden. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:35:00 AM
You have a solid sense of rhyme and rhythm and put feeling into your words. The descriptive images enhance the reader's ability to envision the experience from your poetic viewpoint. Emile #7
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Date: 4/16/2015 7:56:00 AM
This form added another dimension to your work. I enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 4/16/2015 5:12:00 AM
Ah, the angst of unfulfilled love...Your rondeau is perfect for the theme, Andrea. The refrain emphasized the longing. Loved it! 7 of course.Blessings for the contest! :) Kim
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Date: 4/16/2015 3:28:00 AM
Excellent. As usual well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 4/16/2015 1:12:00 AM
Really great poem Andrea, I love the phrase"Like a bauble on a tree,". Sometimes "our fondest dreams" do come true only to find out all that glitters may not be gold in the end; but in memory it can glitter forever, never to tarnish. Good luck in the competition love Shane xxx
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Date: 4/15/2015 11:02:00 PM
Great take on this contest. Great write! A Fav!
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:03:00 PM
Time and circumstance can keep our dreams just within reach...Lovely write Andrea....best wishes in the contest ...hugs
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