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Just When I Thought It Was Over

JUST WHEN I THOUGHT IT WAS OVER… Just when I thought it was over You unleash the storm Seething underneath your deep skin, With the venomous look, you send me packing to the land of silence and calm Just when I thought it was over You curiously whisper into my deafened ear Sending the message of cautionary Yet, I thought it was concern More of a cover-up Once again, you sealed the vacuum Just when I thought it was over You stir up the raging heat at heart It had been long forgotten but here we are again breaking my cloud of silence calling me back from the land of absence Just when I thought it was over I’m dumb-folded by the broken cloud dropping like the hailstorm ,my words rumble in the silence falling with the thud of “enough is enough” with unshaken confidence yet feeling so inadequate. I empty my dismay Just when I thought it was over Your words, falling like the rain, cut through my tender broken heart. Say no more..I need not hear more, my situation is clearly defined now, that it was never over

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Date: 5/31/2013 9:27:00 AM
Diana, good one here. When you thought it was over then it just roll over. Cheers.
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Diana Muthoni
Date: 5/31/2013 10:01:00 AM
thanks a lot.i appreciate
Date: 4/4/2013 3:08:00 PM
nice
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Date: 4/3/2013 1:44:00 PM
A good poem with poetic love's expressions.i enjoyed it.wellcome aboard.
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Diana Muthoni
Date: 4/4/2013 12:38:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 4/2/2013 5:30:00 AM
- Diana, you have written a really good poem . - Welcome to P-Soup - hope you get much pleasure to share your thoughts and words in the form of poems here with us! - Good luck. - Continue with your poems, I want to read more from you in the future. - Have a nice sunny day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Diana Muthoni
Date: 4/3/2013 1:38:00 PM
thank you Annie. Will write more
Date: 4/2/2013 3:07:00 AM
I like the way you express the tension of your situation, Diana. Thanks for sharing, and welcome to PoetrySoup!
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Diana Muthoni
Date: 4/4/2013 12:40:00 AM
thank you expressing what you feel is the best gift you can ever give yourself

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