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Just When I Saw You

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Just When I Saw You

I thought everything's alright;
My decision I hold it tight.
It started just a simple crush,
Now I'm feeling on a crash.
Years ago I made this vow;
Not to look at you again to break this vow.
I pray to God this feeling will perish;
Pure luck admonish!
Coz years ago I feel freedom,
From the cage which serves as our kingdom.
But just looking' into your eyes;
I froze like an eyes,
Just when I saw you again, ridiculously;
My heart pump wildly!

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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:42:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Shera. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol