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The breathing not quite so easy The joints are starting to creak And what used to take a day Now seems to take a week I try hard to avoid Bending down anymore It takes so much effort Getting up off the floor Long insomnia filled nights Seems to be the current way Yet staying awake a problem During the course of the day. I think often of my friends Once a teeming band That can now be counted On the fingers of one hand. This life has been a good life Far more joy than pain or despair And in times of trouble and need Family and friends always there. The sun still rises every morning And still sets every single night And as these things progress My Life is pretty much alright Sometimes I can’t help thinking, Though in truth it pains me so, We’re parked in a waiting room Until it comes our turn to go, Then I look at my garden, Enjoy the warm sunshine, Think I’m not in any rush to Move on any further up the line. So the breathing not so easy Limbs not quite so free And maybe I’m not so supple As once I used to be But I’ve got a little gripper To pick things up,off the floor So really I don’t need to Bend down so much anymore.

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Date: 2/3/2024 1:03:00 AM
A reminder to us all Terry. I am sure this piece will help a few breathe more easy. And there is some satisfaction in passing wisdom on to others while we are waiting. Regards David in NZ
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Terry Ireland
Date: 2/4/2024 11:48:00 PM
Thanks David. Having reached 80 I find myself so much more philosophical about this.
Date: 1/17/2024 12:22:00 PM
you've described this very well, terry, and i can certainly relate. as long as we have the sunshine and the gardens and the ability to write some poems, i think it's worth hanging in there...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 1/21/2024 1:08:00 AM
Thanks ilene, life is so enjoyable.
Date: 1/17/2024 10:39:00 AM
Certainly no Joy in getting on years Terry. Every day there's a new ache somewhere. We just have to try enjoy the years we have left, frightening thought that there's more behind us than in front. Tom
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Terry Ireland
Date: 1/21/2024 1:07:00 AM
Absolutely Tom, but each little ache shows we're still winning

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