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Just Trapped Inside

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Just Trapped Inside

His terror,
His pain
Is the monster's 
Own gain.

Nothing to do,
Just trapped inside,
Can't do anything wrong,
Must abide.

I feel the pain,
But we can't get help,
He's like a little puppy
Who just can't yelp.

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  1. Date: 2/10/2011 1:20:00 PM
    Good simple wording and rhyming. This piece has no trouble in conveying its descriptiveness.