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Just Too Nice

Don’t you detest the fact When she creeps around With a smile on her face So pleasurably helpful To Embark My problems On her problems Without acting as Propelled But you just remain To spot what’s next... What’s next? When you fall into the bottom of the pit And we walk over you What’s next huh? When you’re caught in the desert with 8 lives left And we fly over you on a jetpack What you going to do next? When you’re on a roof with your best friend spider on your wall Its name is Fred right? ..Did I just step on it?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/23/2009 3:30:00 AM
Wait. Dude. Mayeb Its Just Cause I Go To Northern Lehigh. [[Probably]] But Im So Confused. o.0?
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Date: 6/11/2009 3:37:00 PM
started out ok but got lost at the name Chesmu. and thank you for making me make my correction. john h loving iii
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Date: 6/11/2009 5:59:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments on a couple of my poems. I like the stepping on it bit. Robert
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