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Just They'Re Grinning

This cold night bites They have just turned off the lights My head is spinning they’re just grinning Is this actually real? Tommorow will I be able to feel? I wait and wonder and cry some more trying to rise from the cold floor They could hear my body breaking They were just picture taking The blood runs down my knees They all heard me scream please My green eyes have now turned black there is no turning back I am a paper girl now They should all take a bow

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Nate D.

Date: 10/15/2010 11:36:00 AM

DANIELLE, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."

Skat A

Date: 10/15/2010 9:35:00 AM

GOOD MORNING! DANIELLE, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 10/14/2010 10:17:00 AM

chilling and wonderful write, very creative and yet, scary. it took reading over a few times but this was a wonderful piece, congratulations on your feature. --Madison

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/12/2010 2:12:00 PM

Danielle, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 10/12/2010 5:44:00 AM

Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2010 5:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Danielle what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol

Destiny Budd

Date: 3/29/2010 1:48:00 PM

This is intense. I really like it. Hope to see some more great stuff. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2010 10:33:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Danielle. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol