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Just Plain Crude

Filth, foul, greedy, crude Soiled beauty and freedom- Will this disgrace end? A. Green

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/17/2010 12:12:00 PM

It's really a tragedy, what's been happening, the question is posed sure needs to be addressed by those responsible...also thank you for my HM in your past contest :) glad to be in your list :)

Derrick Burton

Date: 5/15/2010 11:00:00 AM

Enjoyed this poetry, love the questions. Have a great day as well.:)

Farah Chamma

Date: 5/15/2010 4:23:00 AM

A beautiful piece. To the point and very potent. Hope everything's fine where you are. It's been a while. ALways, Farah

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/14/2010 10:33:00 PM

Dear Amy, Great Write Good Luck SUPERB YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG -- My POEM "OUR Glass, HOUR Glass is not in YOUR contest and I would Like YOUR Critque on it I just recently got out of Hospital and have restricted use of my hands Please donot think I'm shunning YOU it takes me over an hour to write a small Comment like this ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG

Tobey Hill

Date: 5/14/2010 5:11:00 AM

well done...TAH

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/13/2010 8:04:00 PM

beautiful and good luck!

Rick Parise

Date: 5/13/2010 7:49:00 PM

sounds like a top, top list finisher~~very descriptive indeed! well done!

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/13/2010 6:27:00 PM

Good luck with this one! You have said it well.....will this disgrace ever end? ~ This will do well in the contest, I'm sure! ~ Carrie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 5:43:00 PM

well done on the Haiku, Amy, enjoyed,..p..d

Amy Green

Date: 5/13/2010 4:34:00 PM

I can't post a blog- all the words I want to say are 4 letters and it's not exactly appropriate here at the soup... perhaps later after I have settled down some.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2010 4:31:00 PM

Agreed.. why not post a blog and say as much as u need Amy .. I am so upset by this senseless waste of animal life ... its so sad and tragic they we invade their space.. hope u decide to post the blog and if u have a special poem for it...go for it girl.. behind u 100% ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2010 4:15:00 PM

Perfect words for the photo in Raul's contest and good luck Amy... a tragic event and one so horrific to the environment and wild and sea life ... so sad.. a great write ..luv.. Linda-Marie..