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Just Passing Time

The world keeps turning, though not mine Each passing day just brings more pain, Every waking moment, just passing time Until I meet my love again. Entry for Four Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France. 27/7/2020.Placed=3rd.

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/14/2020 12:51:00 PM

Both your time , word's and sentiment are well spent and so eloquently delivered

Gary Smith
Date: 8/14/2020 2:29:00 PM

Thank you Christopher. :)

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:25:00 PM

Gary, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance

Gary Smith
Date: 7/30/2020 5:41:00 AM

Thank you Constance. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2020 1:43:00 PM

I really really like this one!! Congrats for the win.

Gary Smith
Date: 7/29/2020 2:14:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/28/2020 6:20:00 PM

Love the emotion here, Gary ~

Gary Smith
Date: 7/29/2020 12:37:00 AM

Thank you Line. :)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 1:33:00 PM

Sad but powerful muse Gary. Congratulations on your win!

Gary Smith
Date: 7/28/2020 2:03:00 PM

Thank you Aditi. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2020 8:49:00 AM

Profoundly sad, Gary. I can relate to the feelings you describe so well. Congratulations on your win!

Gary Smith
Date: 7/28/2020 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn. :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/28/2020 4:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your sorrowful, but worthy contest honors, Gary.

Gary Smith
Date: 7/28/2020 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Jenna. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2020 2:52:00 AM

- Four sad lines ... great written, Gary ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 7/28/2020 3:54:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/27/2020 5:28:00 AM

I understand this. Well done Gary :)

Gary Smith
Date: 7/27/2020 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. :)