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Just One Touch of Your Hand

Just one touch of your hand and I taste the late evening stars It would help me forget the last sound of poured rain yet it makes me remember those undying sparks Just one touch of your hand and I live once again in moonlit yesterdays I'd belong to that time When you came in my life Looked me straight in the eyes and rekindled old flames Just one touch of your hand and you're mine You're mine and mine alone You're the breeze on my cheek the smile in my sleep You're the feeling I feared yet a feeling I need all along You're the present and past You're the dew in the dust You're the moment,the memory You're mild passions once born An emotion's serenity. Just one touch of your hand makes this heart understand that the sun would never be gone Its never too late to reach heaven's gate To whisper I love yous as I place a blue rose on your marbled headstone. Just a note-Absence or death are not the end of love but only the beginning of a feeling that is deeper than love itself... And I have loved you more than love itself.. a fiction poem

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/4/2015 9:04:00 AM

This poem has definitely been CHARMed like only Char can do it! A Fav!

Tobey Hill

Date: 4/2/2015 8:00:00 PM

And I taste the late evening stars..This is one of my favorite lines ever read. Bravo! I am a fan CC...TAH

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/18/2015 1:07:00 PM

Wow. This one is very well stitched together with style and deep feelings brought together by your poetic soul. Emile. #7

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/7/2015 9:51:00 PM

That feeling, of something deeper than love itself, that's the feeling of love become forever...this poem is a heart in bloom Charma...it is magnificent in honest heartbeat. "The smile in my sleep, the feeling I feared yet a feeling I needed all along...you're the dew in the dust..." breathtaking affection, and great alliteration my Lady Hawk...J.A.B. A FAV.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/5/2015 10:37:00 AM

deep touching beautiful pen as always charmaine wishing you a great weekend pal

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/4/2015 9:54:00 AM

Beautiful, Charmaine. If not for the note at the end, I never would have guessed it's pure fiction. 7. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2015 4:45:00 PM

Dear Charma, the feelings we have for people do not disappear when they pass to eternal life. You now I can relate to the message here, but I could never have written it as beautifully as you did. Sending big hugs and love to you! Carolyn

Paul Callus

Date: 3/3/2015 3:32:00 PM

One touch which has the energy to bring forth the past and join it with the present...the common thread being undying love. Lovely and touching content and presentation. All the best. // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/2/2015 5:29:00 AM

Excellent. very emotional and deep write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2015 6:30:00 PM

gosh it may be fiction but it reads like the real thing. Love what you put at the end of it, too, charma. Miss you. sometimes I notice you around here! Hope all is well with you.