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Just One More Glass

Just one more glass to quench her thirst thirst of a desert nearer to sea she ordered for another glass she was just on a drinking spree. Thirst of a desert nearer to sea so close to it, yet so far she was just on a drinking spree to forget her pain,to remove her scars. So close to it, yet so far to touch the sea was not easy to forget her pain,to remove her scars again to get that happiness key. To touch the sea was not easy drinking her pain with every glass again to get that happiness key "Another .. g l a s s!",ordered the lass. Drinking her pain with every glass to delete her past as much she could "A n o t h e r ...g l a...!"ordered the lass as glass was only her escape route. To delete her past as much she could at least for this summer night as glass was only her escape route her mind was now a flying kite. At least for this summer night she ordered for another glass her mind was now a flying kite just one more glass to quench her thirst. ========================= Contest:And with a sip Sponsor:Paula Swanson

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Date: 6/12/2012 3:10:00 PM
Nice to see you do this complicated form and so well! Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2012 5:36:00 AM
love it, really well structured. best wishes
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Date: 4/23/2012 9:15:00 AM
A very good one, Kash. I felt sad and stranded reading this which means a great writing I had read.
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Date: 4/22/2012 12:54:00 AM
This form ain't an easy one,but you outdid it wonderfully :) bravo! Charma
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Date: 4/21/2012 10:28:00 AM
kashi buddy.. my fickle poem is on the far side to the right??.. wha haffened??.. huggs to you!.:)
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Date: 4/21/2012 9:43:00 AM
Stunning unique way to interpret the theme and you did it in your favorite form.. I enjoyed this Kash, wishing you all the best for Paula's contest, once again sorry for the delay in replying to your sm :)
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Date: 4/20/2012 10:47:00 PM
Very much creative dear poet. Love this one.
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Date: 4/20/2012 9:44:00 PM
It was pretty cool to do!! Showing how she was losing it!! (interesting to do in a pantoum. Creative)
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Date: 4/20/2012 9:05:00 PM
well you did it again, kash the pantoum superstar. YOu pulled out an awesome poem for the Sip contest. I think it will score high!! Did you deliberately leave off the S S in the second line about "another glass"? I think so. Again, GREAT poem, my friend.
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Date: 4/20/2012 11:43:00 AM
defining piece, kashi.. love the repetition of phrases.. greeat pantuom job.. glad you are better.. i take this table called nexium though i'd rather have the natural cranberry juice for my tummy reflux.... cool winning huggs!)
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Date: 4/20/2012 7:39:00 AM
I love the Pantoum!! Its difficulty makes it so intriguing.. This form take a lot of creativity, well done my friend..:JP]
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Date: 4/20/2012 12:02:00 AM
Like it kash.....Wish you luck in contest! - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/19/2012 8:09:00 PM
Kash.,,,,very smooth and well thot pantoum..you know I'd enjoy the kite reference, right?...such an appropriate poetry form to bring this message bc often pantoums can make u feel a bit dizzy...Super awesome write!...Gwendolen
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