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Just One More Day

Just One More Day One more chance, oh please don't let him die I don't understand, and they won't tell me why Just one more chance to see your face To walk with you in our special place Just one chance, just more day Before I watch all over again as you slip away One day so I could see your smile One thousand two hundred thirty-six miles One more day, and I would try To get to you before you die One more chance to get it right One more day and one more night I don't know what I'd do or say But all I want is one more day But I didn't go, I couldn't go that far Not 1,236 miles without a car So I stayed here and you stayed there And died thinking I didn't care Simon says, Simon says, I don't know what to say Simon says, Simon says, Just one more day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/16/2015 12:37:00 AM
GLORY, congrats on your fine win. SKAT
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Date: 12/14/2015 7:51:00 AM
Very sad :-( congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/14/2015 5:55:00 AM
Hi glory. Congrats for your WIN in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/14/2015 12:02:00 AM
Glory, sadly and beautifully penned, congratulations on your win ~
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Date: 12/13/2015 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 12/13/2015 3:52:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Glory:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/13/2015 3:32:00 PM
Glory, many thanks for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your win :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 12/10/2015 3:47:00 PM
Beautifully expressed the depths of regrets and the futility of an event past...tq for the good read
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