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Just One Kiss

Our first date He was late Brought flowers Talked for hours Took my hand Walked on sand Waves crashing He's dashing Moonlit night Held me tight Moment reached He beseeched Just one kiss It was bliss Wanted more We shared four That's a lot But he's hot! Spell was cast We moved fast Love disclosed He proposed Wedding rings My heart sings Happy life As his wife Then the news Baby blues Soon a son Our first one Born a child We both smiled Motherhood Feels real good September 10, 2020 Threes, Please Contest Sponsored By: Beth Evans

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/21/2020 7:05:00 AM

Just loved this encapsulated form of a portion of your life. Superb! Pangie xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/19/2020 7:08:00 PM

I like it Jenna! Smooth read. Congratulations on your placement! Linda

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2020 2:01:00 PM

wow what a fast worker lol, this reads like a fairytale Jenna, I too have written of a proposal and wedding in fact I did over the 40 lines so have had to shorten it , its so like the footle form once you start you cant stop writing:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/10/2020 2:06:00 PM

Yeah, well he was hot! Moonlight, a beach...it all worked out. haha Thanks, Jan, and I'll get to yours soon. I'm sure it's great, and these are addictive. I had to stop and count how many I had written!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/10/2020 2:01:00 PM

Real super piece Jenna, this really moved super fast for one minute on first date then before you knew anything you were wed and I thought I was quick! Had first date in September engaged at Christmas then wed following April and now married over 30 years! Blessings always,Gordon

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/10/2020 2:05:00 PM

Speed worked for you and your lady, Gordon. That's something to be very proud of. My lines are fictional. Thanks for commenting.