Just One

I wish i had one not 2, nor 3, nor 4 just one person to love and adore just one gal only one i want to know and let my affection show to hold her tight protect her with my might and never let her go i'm not the type of guy to look at all that strides by and brag about his wins to love one girl she'll be my one world would make me happy til the end

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2010 9:44:00 AM

Wow, simplicity is not what i can say this is so sweet, well a good man in search will find her eventually just when you may think it's hopeless think again lol don't wait for her to walk in your life go out there and find her lol, enjoyed your write...P.D.

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/8/2010 10:39:00 PM

Not 2, not 4, not even a whole room full? Are you sure, Karl? We need to talk, bro. You're a one-girl-guy, huh. You'll make a girl happy some day. "i'm not the type of guy / to look at all that strides by" that says your whole poem right there. Nice write.