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Just Like You

I can't pop my gum when I speak I was born without that gene I don't show the fullness of my hips through the tight fit of my jeans I like breathing I don't accentuate my words with a finger cutting through the air My meaning still comes through I may not act like you, walk like you or talk like you I am still a Black Woman We share the same passion and pain Our mothers and grandmothers gave us our sass Our fathers and grandfathers gave us our strength I may not be just like you but I am you A Black Woman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/17/2010 4:35:00 PM
The power of your womenhood permeates through your writing. Nicely done.
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:45:00 AM
love it. Love your take on this
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:54:00 PM
A beautiful statement, thank you for your kind comment, follow your dreams! love Simone
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Date: 9/19/2010 3:11:00 PM
Women of all races face some of the same feelings, emotions, hopes, loves, and expectations from life for us and our families..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 9/19/2010 9:29:00 AM
This sure speaks volumes! I really loved the conviction in this write of yours, Monica :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/18/2010 10:20:00 AM
Very nice Monica. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/16/2010 2:21:00 AM
Beautiful and powerful write Monica.. Awesome!!
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Date: 9/15/2010 4:35:00 PM
I... think... I'm in love.... with you :-) powerful write girlfriend.
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Date: 9/13/2010 6:29:00 PM
I like this one. It reminds me of someone I knew.
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Date: 9/12/2010 5:37:00 PM
I love it deep, and well spoking:)
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:15:00 PM
i like your strength, well stated, thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/12/2010 1:47:00 PM
lovely write with strong words, love this one..P.D.
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Date: 9/12/2010 6:02:00 AM
Well said!!! please read my poem "What My Eyes See Now" I think you will like it...always Michael
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Date: 9/12/2010 4:13:00 AM
Beautiful. I really enjoyed the diginity of this.
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