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Just Let Me Breathe

Let me breathe,let me step on this earth to see the wonderful world of god. More than that,grant me the wish to be in your arms. Do not let the love,which brought both of u together become a curse to me ,which makes me pay a hefty price-i.e. my life. Kindly do not build me a grave even before I am born and do not flush me like waste for being a girl child. Is being born as girl such a crime to you are punishing me with death?. please do not fill your heart with venom instead of love. I promise to be a good daughter, take care of you always, be there for you through thick and thin, make you proud and laugh. do not crush my little heart which loves you, do not break my hands,which craves to hug u. I am a bundle of happiness not a burden. Is it too much to ask for a chance to live and love you? yes I am girl child,it does not make me less human. Just let me have my chance of living and do not pluck the bud even before it blossoms. [This poem reflects about the most dangerous crime -female foeticide.I hope this kiling stops forever and girl child is embraced .]

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Date: 10/27/2013 5:33:00 PM
you have written a very important poem and very poignant words. Good for you. I really like this one.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 10/28/2013 10:23:00 AM
thank you so much for reading.have a great day.
Date: 7/5/2013 12:34:00 AM
It is such a pity that the girl child feels so unwanted in some parts of the subcontinent but times will change.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 7/5/2013 8:18:00 AM
thank you so much for reading and yes its really bad that this problem is still there .hope people realise their sins and appreciate girl child.
Date: 6/23/2013 5:55:00 PM
It kinda breaks my heart.It is a harsh reality that we have to fight.Keep writing.......... writing for cause
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 6/24/2013 2:06:00 AM
thank you so much for your words.
Date: 5/18/2013 8:01:00 AM
Thats a brilliant poem, Kenisha. I am glad to see a fellow feminist over here. Cheers. Lets make this world a better place. Have a great one!
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 5/18/2013 8:26:00 AM
thank you so much and have a great weekend :)
Date: 5/12/2013 12:04:00 AM
A girl will always be there as a guy won't in tough times.....A daughter is forever and son only till he's needy himself.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 5/12/2013 3:29:00 AM
yes true but i wish for gender inequality and a society where everyone is equal.have a great day.
Date: 5/4/2013 8:57:00 AM
VERY HEART RENDERING EMOTIONS OF A GIRL CHILD. SHE TOO HAS THE RIGHT TO LIVE AND DREAM.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 5/4/2013 9:08:00 AM
very true and thank you for the comment.
Date: 4/21/2013 10:42:00 AM
Hello Kenisha, this is a very powerful poem... always~ Linda
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/22/2013 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so much .have a great day :)

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